The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions from 1980 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
figure
for visitors who travelled to four different places in Use synonyms
Scotland
from 1980 to 2010.
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Overall
, the chart witnessed a downward trend in the Linking Words
percentage
of tourists visiting Use synonyms
aquariums
and Use synonyms
festivals
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while
the opposite was true in Linking Words
castles
and Use synonyms
zoos
. Strikingly, Use synonyms
castles
are the most highly appreciated among the four destinations through the Use synonyms
period
.
In 1980, the Use synonyms
percentage
of travellers who visited Use synonyms
castles
in Use synonyms
Scotland
was about 22% followed by that of Use synonyms
aquariums
with 20%. Use synonyms
Then
, it witnessed a rapid rise in the Linking Words
percentage
of sightseers who visited Use synonyms
castles
10 years later. After reaching a peak in 1995 with 45%, the Use synonyms
figure
for people to Use synonyms
castles
experienced a significant decrease to 35% in 2000 Use synonyms
then
declined slightly to the Linking Words
end
of the Use synonyms
period
with almost a third Use synonyms
however
the Linking Words
percentage
of tourists who visited the castle reached the highest Use synonyms
at the
Linking Words
end
of Use synonyms
report
. Add an article
the report
Whereas
the Linking Words
figure
for Use synonyms
aquariums
rose significantly to 35% in 1985 and reached the highest point in Use synonyms
this
year. Linking Words
Then
it witnessed a dramatic decline to 20% in 1990. The rate of people to Linking Words
aquariums
reached the lowest.
In the first year of Use synonyms
1980s
, the Change the article
the 1980s
percentage
of tourists who visited Use synonyms
festivals
in Use synonyms
Scotland
was highest Use synonyms
with
30% Change preposition
at
while
the opposite was true for Linking Words
zoos
. The Use synonyms
figure
for Use synonyms
zoos
witnessed a fluctuation from 1980 to 2000 with the lowest point in 1990 before it experienced Use synonyms
a
growth to the Remove the article
apply
end
of Use synonyms
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period
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the period
whereas
the Linking Words
percentage
of visitors who went to Use synonyms
festivals
in Use synonyms
Scotland
fell steadily to the Use synonyms
end
of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
period
. In 2010, the Add an article
the period
percentage
of sightseers to Use synonyms
zoos
was 20% compared to 19% of people who came to Use synonyms
festivals
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