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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the annual
milk
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production
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 in four countries:
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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 over three decades exactly 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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, the
Netherlands
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 consistently produced the highest quantity of
milk
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, followed closely by
Australia
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,
while
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Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 had much smaller outputs but demonstrated steady growth over the period. The
Netherlands
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 remained the leading
milk
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 producer, with
production
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 levels fluctuating slightly before peaking at 11,466,000
liters
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 in 2010. After a small decrease from 11,262,000 in 1990 to 11,155,000 in 2000, it recovered with a modest increase in the following decade.
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Australia
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 experienced a steady decline. Starting at 11,246,000 in 1990, its
production
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 dropped less
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 to 11,105,000 in 2000 and
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 significantly to 9,165,000 in 2010.
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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, whilst producing substantially less
milk
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, exhibited consistent growth.
Tanzania
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's output rose from 87,000 lt in 1990 to 155,000 in 2010, nearly doubling its
production
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.
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Guatemala
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 tripled its
milk
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production
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 over the same period, increasing from 26,000 in 1990 to 84,000 in 2010. Despite these improvements, both nations' contributions remained minimal compared to the
Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, netherlands, australia, tanzania, guatemala with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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