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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data on the daily
oil
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 output of four countries - Nigeria, Chad, Congo, and Somalia - over the period from 2000 to 2004.
Overall
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, Congo's
oil
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 output declined between 2000 and 2004,
whereas
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 the other countries recorded increases in
oil
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production
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. Notably, Chad experienced remarkable growth in its
oil
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 industry during
this
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 period. In 2000, Congo had the largest
oil
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 output among the four countries, reaching 275,000
tonnes
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.
However
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, its
oil
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production
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 gradually decreased over the following years, dropping to 203,000
tonnes
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 in 2004.
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, Nigeria's
production
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 figure slightly increased, from 205,000
tonnes
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 in 2000 to 213,000
tonnes
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 in 2004. Meanwhile, Somalia experienced a significant rise in
oil
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production
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, from 5,000
tonnes
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 in 2000 to 50,000
tonnes
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 in 2004. Noticeably, Chad had no
oil
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production
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 over the period from 2000 to 2002.
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, it began producing
oil
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 in 2003, with a
production
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 of 8,000
tonnes
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,
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 and reached a peak of 50,000
tonnes
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 in 2004.
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