The pie charts below show reasons why people left the UK for other countries and why people stayed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the causes of populations leaving

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the

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other nations, and the

reasons

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of humans

staying

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in the

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, the main reason for individuals to

departured

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departure

from the

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is the quality of life,

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the least reason is family.

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, people prefer to live in the

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mostly

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family and

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friends

. In comparison to language which is showed the lowest. Citizens are leaving the

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for many

reasons

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first

the

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and the majority

due to

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quality of life which showed the highest

persentage

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percentage

about 37%,

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the

less

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lowest

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proportion was for family and

frinds

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friends

for

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9%.

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the

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apply

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finances and employment

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illustrated

almost the other half of the causes 24% and 18% respectively. On the other side, the humans who like to stay in the

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have their

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own

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. Family and

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friends appear

to take the lead for the highest percentage 43% but language and employment showed

low

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a low

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proportion

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11% and 15% respectively.

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, social life and financial

reasons

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were almost near to

ech

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each

other 21% and 15% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, while".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, reasons with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

182 words

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