The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea, buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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The bar chart shows the pattern for the preferrable

coffee

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and tea drinking manner in five cities in Australia. In general, Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart are three

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consumption giants.

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, it could be observed from the graph that in all countries except Adelaide, enjoying

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or tea in the café is the most popular drinking habit. Looking into more details, nearly 65% of

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Melbourne residents are into

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or tea drinking in

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, narrowly followed by 63% and 61% for the same group in Hobart and Sydney. The second common

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coffee drinking

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convention turned out to be purchasing instant

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, with the highest figure 54 (in percentage) presented in Hobart, and the lowest appeared in Sydney (just over 45%). The percentage of people who

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fresh

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in the

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4 weeks occupies the least in total residents, in all five countries. None of the

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surpass 45%, with the minimal ratio (35%)

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in Brisbane.

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