The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams illustrate the relationship status of Canadian and Australian
citizens
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. The data is presented in percentages.
Overall
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, there are more single people, those who are never married, separated, widowed, or divorced, than married in both countries. Most of the people of Canada are not divorced but already separated,
while
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in Australia, most of its
population
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are in a marriage.
First,
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more than 50% of Canadian
citizens
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are separated but not divorced.
Then
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, 29% of them are happily married.
Moreover
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, the
population
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that has never been married and already widowed stands in the same ratio of 7%.
Lastly
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, 3% of the
citizens
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are in same-sex marriage
while
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the rest had a divorce.
Secondly
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, almost half of the Australian
population
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is in a marriage 46%. The second biggest
population
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is separated but not divorced by 41%. The widower
makesup
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makes up
makeup
6% of the
population
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.
Then
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, 5% of the
citizens
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are single and the rest are divorced.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words citizens, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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