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The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given illustrates Southlands primary production of
internatioal
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international
tourism
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,
dairy
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products
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,and meat
products
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 in three time periods which are 2000, the current period(2024) and
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future
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the future
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 assumption in 2025.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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internatioal
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international
tourism
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 and
dairy
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products
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 exports are much higher now than before.
While
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 for meat
products
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 it used to be exported considerably in 2000 than now or in the
future
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.
On the other hand
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,international
tourism
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 will be exported
greatly
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more
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 in 2025,than
any
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in any
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 other year.
Southalands
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Southlands
 exports
on
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of
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internatioal
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international
tourism
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 in 2025 will reach
the
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a
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 peak of 10
billion
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 pounds.
Whereas
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, in 2000 it was 8
billion
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 pounds,and the current year lies in the middle of the two years (9
billion
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).
However
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,the exportation of
dairy
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products
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 is reaching
the
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a
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 peak of 10
billion
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 in the current year which is 2024.
while
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 in the
future
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its
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it's
it is
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 slightly less of
approximetly
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approximately
 9.5
billion
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.Yet,the production and exportation of
dairy
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products
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 before was much less
by
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than
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 3
billion
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.
Moreover
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, meat
products
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 did not reach the peak for all three time periods,and the amount is quite similar.It's very clear that the exportation was slightly higher before than
nowdays
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nowadays
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 and in the
future
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,as before they used to export 6
billion
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whereas
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 now
its
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it's
it is
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approximetly
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approximately
 less by half and in 2025 by one
billion
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 compared to 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourism, dairy, products, future, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • comparisons
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • international tourism
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • export values
  • overview
  • highlight
  • sectors
  • future projections
  • data analysis
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