The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration gives information about the finances of a charity organisation in the United States, detailing the
revenue
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sources
as well as
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how it was utilised during the year 2016.
Overall
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, donated food made up the majority of income,
whereas
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, investments and government grants contributed the least. Regarding expenditures, the charity spent the most on program services,
while
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management and general expenses took up the smallest fraction of
spendings
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. In 2016, a total of $53,561,580 USD was generated in
revenue
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, out of which 86% came from donated food, followed by community contributions, the 2nd largest
revenue
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source with 10%.
In contrast
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, program
revenue
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, investments,
government
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and government
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grants, among other sources, all contributed with very small percentages (2.2%, 0.7%, 0.2%, and 0.4%, respectively). In regards to how
this
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money was spent, a total of $52,224,896 USD was put towards the organisation's goals. About 96% of total
revenue
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was spent on program services, meanwhile, the other 4% went into financing, the fundraisers (2.6%) and the management (1.6%).
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