The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures present the current development of Westley compared to its situation in 1815. The first map shows the site plan of Westley in 1815
while
the second illustrates its current condition.
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Overall
, there had been a significant change in the infrastructure and only the town hall and market hall remained the same.
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First,
in terms of transportation, the Twine Toll Bridge had been demolished and a railway was built on top of it. Linking Words
Due to
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event, the citizens can only take the train to head towards London today. Linking Words
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, the fields in the southwest were cut down Linking Words
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Secondly
, the area on the southeast had been transformed into, not only residential but a business area as well. On top of that, the Lenton Woods had been cut down and turned into Lenton Housing Estate. The church in the middle of the city was replaced by the West Gate shopping centre. Linking Words
Moreover
, the sports centre and museum are now located where the Coach Inn was. Linking Words
Finally
, Lord Westley' House had been destroyed and Lenton Hontel and The Red Lion were built on top of it.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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