The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
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The maps provide key information about the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is clear from the maps that a lot of variation happened in 2010,
such
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as added houses and remaining primary schools.
In addition
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, in 1930, there was a lot of farmland and gardens with large houses in the middle,
whereas
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in 2010, the map demonstrates built houses
instead
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of agricultural land.
According to
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what is shown, in 1930, that times they were more interested in farming and shops along all sides of the river.
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, they had a post office and gardens with a large house in the middle of the map. In terms of 2010, they were removing all farmland and shops
as well as
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gardens.
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, they replaced a large house with a retirement house. We noticed the primary school and post office were in a stable location. Eventually, there was not that much change in town.
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