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The table below shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other's countries in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other's countries in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of 5 European
countries
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's residents living in each
others
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other's
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countries
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 in 2011.
Overall
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, it is obvious that
on
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in
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 total, Germany was the country that had the largest amount of
people
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 lived in. Regarding
to
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the table, the
quantity
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number
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 of
people
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 who live in
Germans
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Germany
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 was 1198k, followed. that was England with 1 037k. Sequently, Spain was the nation that
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 a high data with 861k
people
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lived
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living
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 in. In
constrost
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contrast
,
that
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the
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 3 nations Witnessed a lower rate
on
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of
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people
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 who migrated to
another
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another country
other countries
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countries
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,
British
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the British
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 and Germans
was
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 around 530k when Spain recorded just 202k in 2011. It witnessed
anopposite
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an opposite
opposite
 trend in Italy and Poland,
while
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 the number of
resident
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residents
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 lived in just 196k. There were around 6000
people
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lived
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living
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 in Poland in 2011, but the number of Polish
lived
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living
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 in 4
others
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other
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countries
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 saw a huge quantity
1168000
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of 1168000
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people
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. Following that
was
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were
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 863
thousands
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thousand
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 Italian
migrated
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who migrated
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 to
another
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another country
other countries
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countries
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, people, k with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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