The table below shows the employment of students from four countries in the UK after their first courses in 2001.

The table below shows the employment of students from four countries in the UK after their first courses in 2001.
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The table compares the type of
employment
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of student, after finishing their first course in the UK countries in 2001.
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,
it is clear that
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the highest total
employment
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was in Scotland,
whereas
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in Northern Ireland was the lowest one. As the table shows, there were three types of
employment
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: permanent, temporary, and overseas. Starting with the country which had the highest figure,
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which
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was Scotland. The biggest type of
employment
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was permanent and the lowest one was overseas, 43.6% and 2.6%, respectively. Students who worked in temporary
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were 20.2%. The total number of workers after the first course was 66.4%. In England, undergraduates who worked overseas were less than pupils who worked temporarily, 2.3% and 23%. Permanent employers were 33%. The total workers were 58.3% in England in 2001. In Wales, undergraduates who worked permanently were ten times more than students who worked overseas, 30% and 3%, respectively. Temporary
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was 12.4%. The total percentage of
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was 45.3%. In Northern Ireland pupils who operated overseas were five times less than employers who worked permanently, 20% and 5%. Temporary
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was 8.6% in Northern Ireland in 2001

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