The pie charts compare the proportion of the trend in using water in six areas all over the world in term of three different categories
The pie charts illustrate the amount of the trend in using water in six regions all over the world in
term
of three categories.
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Overall
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it is clear that
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is the highest rate in four different areas. At the same time, the percentages in Europe and North America are opposite that.
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To begin
with, Africa and Central Asia scored 84% and 88% of Agricultural Linking Words
use
in their numbers. With a small proportion for other parts. Use synonyms
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, South East Asia was similar for the Linking Words
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two statistics. Used were 81% for the blue section. Only 7% for the red piece. Linking Words
Lastly
, 12% for the orange department. Linking Words
Moreover
, Europe and North America had simulation rates in their figures. By advantage for industrial Linking Words
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section by about half of Use synonyms
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one is South America. They used 71 per cent of water Agriculturally. Linking Words
Additionally
, 19% was for Domestic Linking Words
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. and 10% for industrial water Use synonyms
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