The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the mode of
transportations
( walk, bicycle, car, and bus) utilized by Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
the
UK students aged 11 -16 in a certain year.
Correct article usage
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Overall
, it can be seen that most of the UK students with short Linking Words
distance
from the school prefer to walk, Use synonyms
whereas
, buses were more popular to those who lived in a Linking Words
distance
.
In detail, walking was more popular among pupils with 0-1 Use synonyms
miles
Use synonyms
distance
from the school, approximately 80%. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
bicycle
were widely used as a mode of transportation with a Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
distance
of 1-2 Use synonyms
miles
.Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
traveling
by car was less popular among the UK children at about 30% in 2-5 over Change the spelling
travelling
miles
.
Looking more at the graph, most of the students who lived over 5 Use synonyms
miles
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used
buses to travel Rephrase
away used
going
to school, about less than 75%, Verb problem
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while
50% with a Linking Words
distance
of 2-5 and less than 10% of the children used bicycle and chose to walk.Use synonyms
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