The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the importance number about family housing in England and
wales
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Wales
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during
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from
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1918 until 2011. From an
overall
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look , It can easily seen
household
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households
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in owned houses are dramatically
increase but
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increasing
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,
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but household
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household
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households
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in rented apartments are
fall down
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falling
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for many reasons. Delving into
further
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detail, in the first three years household build
by
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my
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own was very low and limited but , home by feet money was very high.Because of many reasons that family faces. Concerning the rest, in the
last
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five years the
own
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apply
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house
is
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has
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growing
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grown
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very fast and slightly because the parents try to make a good life for the kids.
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