The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the importance number about family housing in England and
wales
Capitalize word
Wales
during
1918 until 2011.
From an Change preposition
from
overall
look , It can easily seen Linking Words
household
in owned houses are dramatically Fix the agreement mistake
households
increase but
, Wrong verb form
increasing
Correct word choice
but household
household
in rented apartments are Fix the agreement mistake
households
fall down
for many reasons.
Delving into Wrong verb form
falling
further
detail, in the first three years household build Linking Words
by
own was very low and limited but , home by feet money was very high.Because of many reasons that family faces.
Concerning the rest, in the Correct your spelling
my
last
five years the Linking Words
own
house Correct word choice
apply
is
Verb problem
has
growing
very fast and slightly because the parents try to make a good life for the kids.Wrong verb form
grown
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