The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of concerns raised in the educational, ecological and healthcare areas by the inhabitants of the seven main cities of the UK in 2008.

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, the most raised issues were related to the basic services in daily life

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as health, education and training.

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, the residents of metropolises brought up the concerns about air pollution more frequently than those in other areas. The affairs about the wellness of people showed by far the highest percentages, reported by 45% of the residents of Glasgow showing the least amount and peaking at 58% by Belfast and Cardiff locals. Problems with the knowledge and well-being of people affected approximately half of the citizens, showing the least amount in Manchester and Newcastle and above half in other urban areas. Air pollution,

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, exhibited less matter than the previous ones.

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, the citizens of crowded metropolises

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as London, Manchester and Cardiff struggled with it and had a necessity for salvation, showing 16%, 14% and 12% respectively.

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a large number of issues were addressed by the citizens of Belfast and Cardiff, the concerns in Newcastle were comparatively fewer and less intense.

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high percentage
real estate market
traffic congestion
transportation issues
urban areas
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law enforcement
education and employment issues
job market
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The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries, people are now living longer than before. Some peple say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closure of shops in cities and towns Do you agree or disagree

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell him which team won • Describe the weather conditions that day • Say how you felt about the match