The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart compares data about how many minutes per billion Australians spent on the phone at 3 various items namely, Local, Mobile, and national& international from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of all factors other than Local increased over the period of 7 years.
According to
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the diagram, at the start, Local, which type of telephone that people who lived in Australia used a lot at all times, hit 72:
then
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it climbed slightly and reached the vertex of 90 in 2005;
however
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, it fell marginally and
finally
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, it scored the same figure as score in 2001. The graph demonstrates that Natinal & International and Mobiles have different fashions from Local owing to the fact that Natinal & International were the second one;
additionally
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, they scored 38 in the beginning, and after that, it rose moderately to 61 in 2008.
In addition
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, Mobiles, the
last
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element between 2001 and 2008, recorded just over zero in 2001;
thereafter
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it went up fractionally to 12 until 2005. Later it leapt significantly to 46 in 2008.
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