The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the amount of rainfall and
temperature
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per month in Eastern African regions.
Overall
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, the graph shows that both
rain
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level and
temperature
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degree increase in Spring and Autumn times and drop down during Summer and Winter seasons. The
temperature
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fluctuates throughout the
year
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, in the first month of the
year
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it starts at 22.5 °C and increases significantly to reach its peak in March at 23 Celsius.
Then
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, it begins to go down gradually until it reaches 20.5 degrees in July which is the lowest
temperature
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in the
year
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. It grows dramatically to 23.5 °C in October before its sharp decrease to 21.5 °C in the
last
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month of the
year
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. The level of
rain
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in the east of Africa remains stable at under 50 millimetres during Summer and Winter seasons
while
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in Autumn it reaches its peak at just under 300 mm as the highest amount of
rain
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during the
year
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. In October and November times the amount of
rain
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is steady at just under 150 millimeters.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, rain, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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