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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The bar chart provides key information about how many
hours
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 a day
tourists
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 from China,
USA
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the USA
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, Turkey, and Brazil spent doing
leisure
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activities
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while
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 on vacation in Greece during 2019.
Overall
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 , it is clear from the representation that Chinese and American
tourists
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 spend most of their
leisure
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 time
activities
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 in reading
books
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.
In addition
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, most
tourists
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 spend the least amount of
hours
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in
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apply
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visiting
places
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,
whereas
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 Brazilian and Turkish
tourists
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 invest
the
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their
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leisure
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activities
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 time at the
beach
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. In terms of Chinese
tourists
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'
leisure
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activities
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 time they spend 8
hours
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 a day
books
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 reading, three
hours
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 at the
beach
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, and around one hour only visiting
places
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,
while
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 the American
tourists
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'
leisure
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activities
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is
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are
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 divided into 4
hours
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 at the
beach
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, 5
hours
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books
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 reading, and 3
hours
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 visiting
places
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.
According to
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 what is shown Turkish
tourists
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 spent 5
hours
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 at the
beach
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, 4
hours
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 reading
books
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, and 3
hours
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 visiting
places
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. The Brazilian
leisure
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activities
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hours
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 spent 6
hours
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 at the
beach
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, 4
hours
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 reading
books
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, and 2
hours
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 visiting
places
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, tourists, leisure, activities, books, places, beach with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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