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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there is any local events happening at the time

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DEAR SIR, I HOPE
THIS
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 LETTER FINDS YOU WELL,I AM POOJA,
PRACTICING
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A PRACTICING
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 LAWYER FROM ANNA NAGAR WEST,THIRUMANGALAM,CHENNAI WHICH IS
BUSY
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A BUSY
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 CITY,I HAVE BEEN LIVING IN THE LOCALITY FOR SEVERAL YEARS.I AM WRITING TO INQUIRE ABOUT THE OOTY RESORT,WHICH I WOULD LIKE TO
ACCOMODATE
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ACCOMMODATE
 NEXT MONTH FOR A SHORT BREAK. I EXPECT YOU TO PROVIDE ME
THE
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ACCOMODATION
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ACCOMMODATION
 DETAILS AND TARIFF FOR ONE WEEK WHICH ON JAN
20THAFTERNOON
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20TH AFTERNOON
 TO JAN 26TH AFTERNOON. MY REQUIREMENT FOR THE STAY WOULD BE LUXURY SINGLE ZOOM WITH BEST
AMENITYS
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AMENITIES
 AND DELICIOUS FOOD TO BE SERVED.
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MOREOVER
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 I WOULD LIKE TO VISIT THE LOCAL AREAS,
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 WOULD GO FOR BOATING IN
LAKE
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THE LAKE
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 AND I MAY VISIT THE FLOWER SHOW,OTHER THAN
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 COULD PLEASE SUGGEST
ME
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TO ME
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 ANY LOCAL EVENTS AND
ITS
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THEIR
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 TIMING WHICH WOULD BE INTERESTING TO VISIT SO THAT I CAN ENJOY THE EVENT.
IT
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 WOULD BE
GREATFUL
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GRATEFUL
 FOR A PROMPT RESPONSE FROM YOU. THANK YOU YOURS SINCERELY R.POOJA
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greeting and closing
Try to use formal salutations without all capital letters, such as 'Dear Sir or Madam,' for a more professional touch.
single idea per paragraph
Include paragraph breaks for each main idea to improve the flow and readability of the letter.
complete response
Ensure the task of inquiring about suggestions is explicitly addressed to demonstrate full task completion.
complete response
The letter clearly states the purpose and details of the intended visit, which fulfills the basic task requirements.
greeting and closing
The closing is appropriately polite, ending with gratitude and a sign-off, which is suitable for formal letters.
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