32.The chart below shows women aged from 16 to 25 in particular country who prefer to watch or participate in a variety of sports. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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data compares the rates of females between the ages of 16 to 25 who reside in an unnamed country and participated in different sports with the rates of people who watched them in 2000.

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Tennis

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and Golf have the highest amount of participants but have a different watching rate respectively, Followed by the other activities in both categories.

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and Golf have the highest rate of participation as stated before, with 30 women participating in both sports. Followed by Basketball and Athletics with around 20 females participating. Horse riding and racing has around 15 participants and the least participation rate goes to Badminton with around 10 females only. The most watched sport is

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at 50 viewers and

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Basketball and athletics at around 15 views.

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golf is the second most popular sport, it lacks in view rates , unlike

tennis

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with 10 watchers only. Badminton and horse racing come in

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place with less than 10 watchers for each one.

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