The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart describes the differences between medium spending of
Japanese
and Use synonyms
Malaysian
families by five major categories which are Housing, Transport, Food, Health care and Other goods and services.
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Overall
, most Linking Words
Malaysian
expenses were on Housing, Use synonyms
while
the most money used by the Linking Words
Japanese
was for other goods and services, at 29%. Meanwhile, both countries had less money allocated to Health care which was at 3% and 6%.
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Further
details perspective, housing accounted for 21% of total Linking Words
Japanese
household spending, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
Malaysian
domestic housing spending percentage made up a significantly higher fraction of 13%. In terms of transport, the proportion spent by Malaysians was 10%, Use synonyms
while
the figure for the Linking Words
Japanese
was double in comparison. The percentage of food which was expensed by the Malaysians was 27%. Use synonyms
This
was a little over the Linking Words
Japanese
's food expense by 3%. As above mentioned, in comparison with health care spending from Use synonyms
Japanese
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households
it accounted for 6%, which was 3% more than that of Malaysians. The Add a comma
households,
last
category was other goods and services, the Linking Words
Japanese
family spent 29% of their total expense, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
Malaysian
was just a little below, at 26%.Use synonyms
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