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You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say what the participant liked about the hotel. Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Shweta Bhat, CEO of ABC company. We had organised a meeting at your hotel on Monday 15th
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,2024. I am writing
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 letter to inform you that the participants were unhappy about the
food
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 that was served for lunch to them. Let me first start with some positive feedback we received about the hotel from the members. Everyone was really impressed by the decoration and the arrangements that
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done
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 by your team.
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, the service of your staff was quick and the staff was really polite and patient with everyone.
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, most of the participants were disappointed by the quality of the
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 that was served to them.
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, the portion was small and the
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 was too salty and oily.
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 already had informed your team about the level of
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spiciness
 still it was not followed
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. As per my suggestions, in future do refer to
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client
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 special notes for recipes.
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, taste the
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 before your staff serves it.
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, hiring a qualified chef will be an asset to your hotel. I look
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forward
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 from you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Shweta Bhat.
Submitted by bhat.shweta17 on

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task achievement
Ensure all details regarding the specifics of the event, like the exact issues with the food, are clearly stated.
coherence cohesion
Watch out for minor grammatical inaccuracies for improved clarity and precision.
greeting and closing
The letter begins with a clear greeting and introduction, providing context to the message.
single idea per paragraph
The structure includes separate paragraphs for positive feedback, problem identification, and suggestions, which enhances readability.
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