The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
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The bar chart provides key information about the proportion of females and males from
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other
Asian
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who have passed the driving test from the year of 1980 to 2010. The units are measured in percentages.
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, it is clear from the graph that women have the
higest
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highest
rates of passing throughout the years.
whereas
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, men have the lower ratio. In terms of the year 1980 the
women
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passing percentage started
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around 50%
then
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gradually
increadsed
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increased
increase
to almost over 55%,
while
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in 2000 women
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hit the highest peak to be almost
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70% of successfully passing the exam.
In contrast
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, the
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flutuatued
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fluctuated
to almost 60% in 2010.
According to
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what is shown men passing
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results
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in 1980 were only above 29% and
then
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witnessed
a significant increase in 1990 to hit almost 40%, but over the years from 2000 to 2010, the percentage skyrocketed to almost 50% and
stablised
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stabilised
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