The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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diagram illustrates the process of

sugar

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production, from

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sugar

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cane

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, throughout many steps.

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, there are 7 steps to reach the final stage, where

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is produced as

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product.

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is the

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cane

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plant and cultivation and it takes from 12 to 18 months. After the agricultural of the

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cane

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the harvest takes a part,

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while

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there

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to

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ways

for doing

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that, the first one is to cut the

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cane

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by the farmers using basic tools, and another way using

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and tractors.

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, the canes are squeezed by a crushing machine to make

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juice

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.

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, the

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is purified by a limestone filter.

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, the purified

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is evaporated

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syrup by the heat. The syrup is moved to

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to separate the syrup

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from the

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crystals.

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, as the

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step in

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production, the

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crystals are dried and cooled.