The graph gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the rates of birth and death of the inhabitants of New Zealand from 1901 to 2101. Units are measured in thousands.
Overall
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, a significantly greater percentage of children were born in the early years
while
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death rates were considerably lower, showing a constant upward trend.
However
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,
this
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situation is expected to be different after both birth and death rates reverse course in the foreseeable future . At
first,
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the number of child deliveries showed a gradual increase from 20,000 to 60,000, reaching 2 peaks in 1961 and 1971 with more than 60,000 newborns in the country.
After
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this
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, the graph records a gradual decline in the sum, apart from the fluctuation in the 1990s. The newborns are likely to be less than half a hundred thousand from 2031 onwards. The statistics of passed people,
on the other hand
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, showed
initially
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about half that of newborns. After a brief ascent in 1921, the proportion rose in steady increments till the current years, when the annual number of deaths is exhibiting a rapid rise. Unfortunately, dead citizens will probably reach a peak of around 60,000 in the 2050s and plateau later.
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