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The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the quantity
of
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percentage of distinct materials of household
garbages
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garbage
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, namely plastic, cans, paper,
glass
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and glass
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, which were recycled in 1992 , 1997, and 2002.
Overall
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, most
recycleable
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recyclable
 trash increased in percentage number in following years, except 2 types of
waste
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 which were cans trash that dropped from nearly 20
percent
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 in 1992 to close to 10
percent
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 in 1997 but plastic
waste
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that
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remained the same amount at slightly over 10
percent
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 of being recycled from 1997 to 2002 In detail,
paper
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the paper
a paper
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 was the
waste
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 that had
highest
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the highest
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 rate of
recycle
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recycled
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waste
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 during 5 years, from 1992 to 1997, approximately rose from 25
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percent
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per cent
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 to
neark
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nearly
near
 40
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percent
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,
on the other hand
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,
plasic
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plastic
 was the lowest type of
recycleable
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recyclable
 trash in 1992 and 1997 which the amount had tiny increased from at 10
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percent
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per cent
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 to slightly over 10
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percent
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per cent
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. Surprisingly, glass was recycled the most in 2002 at
closely
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50
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to 50
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percent
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per cent
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, which
the
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had increased over than 20
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percent
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per cent
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 in the past 5 years from 1997.
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,
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 plastic remained the same lowest position rate of
recycleable
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recyclable
wasste
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waste
 in 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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