Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - describe where you lived when you were a student at the university - recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation - warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing
Dear Lisa,
I am so glad to help You to look for accommodation
where
is near my university. When I was Correct word choice
that
as
at the university, I had been lived in an apartment for 4 years, which offered to students or others from my school. It only takes 5 minutes on foot to the main gate of Change preposition
apply
school
, and it just takes 10 Add an article
the school
a school
mninutes
on foot to the bus stop or train station. There Correct your spelling
minutes
has
very Verb problem
is
convinent
transport Correct your spelling
convenient
aroundmy
Correct your spelling
around
apartment
: By the way, if you search apartment online, you should go to double check Correct article usage
the apartment
theinformation
at reception. Because they might not update the information on time. So I advise you Correct your spelling
the information
go
to see the teacher who is in charge of accommodation Fix the infinitive
to go
at
first. It Change preposition
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wil
be saving more your time and energy.
What's more, when you are choosing Correct your spelling
will
accomdation
, there are two suggestions for you: Correct your spelling
accommodation
First,
please check the date that you are going to school. Is Linking Words
it
any Correct pronoun usage
there
avilable
accomadation for you Correct your spelling
available
at
that date.
Change preposition
on
In addition
, please make sure how long will you stay there. You are not able to get a refund even if you move out Linking Words
the
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of the
accomadation
earlier. So check how long is available you can stay. At Correct your spelling
accommodation
last
, Linking Words
hopefully
you can find Add a comma
hopefully,
a
suitable Correct article usage
apply
accomodation
soon and enjoy Correct your spelling
accommodation
the
life at university.
Friendly,Correct article usage
apply
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas into clear paragraphs. Try separating the introduction, body (with distinct ideas), and conclusion for better readability.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains only one main idea to improve clarity and flow.
task achievement
You have a friendly and helpful tone throughout the letter, which is engaging for the reader.
task achievement
You completed the task by addressing all the bullet points asked for in the question.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate, which helps maintain a good structure for a formal letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,