The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the five famous
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instagram
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influencers there
are
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Cristiano
Ronaldo
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,
Rock
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, Ariana, Kylie and
selena
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Selena
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gomez in different years, partially
2018
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in 2018
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and 2021.
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,
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Instagram
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instagram
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followers
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were
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increased
2021
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in 2021
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than
the
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2018. Selena
gomes
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Gomez
Gomes
had the most
followers
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on instagram
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instagram
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accounts
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in 2018
while
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the
Rock
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had the lowest fanbase.
Ronaldo
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and
the
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Ariana Grande plateaued both
accounts
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followers
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were 100
millons
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million
millions
. the
Rock
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instagram
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Instagram
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accounts
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had the lowest fanbase
which
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80
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millions
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million
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followers
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. in
the
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2021
can be seen
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Ronaldo
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reached the peak of his
accounts
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while
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Selina
Gomez
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Gomez's
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followers
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dropped .
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Ronaldo
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Ronaldo's
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followers
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excceded
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exceeded
over 300
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millions
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million
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and Selina's
followers
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declined 240
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millions
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million
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. Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner both influencers remain constant
their
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in their
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accounts
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fllowers
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flowers
followers
which
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was
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250
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millions
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million
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. The
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Rock
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instagram
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Instagram
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follwers
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followers
can be seen
notabaly
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notably
increased. There
were
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an increased
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increased
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90
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of 90
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millions
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million
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to 250
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millions
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million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words instagram, ronaldo, rock, followers, accounts, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • popularity
  • Instagram accounts
  • growth
  • decline
  • comparison
  • remained stable
  • significant change
  • new entries
  • exits
  • patterns
  • trends
  • noteworthy
  • notable
  • fluctuation
  • predominant
  • dominant
  • proliferation
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