The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the five famous
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flowers
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Rock
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instagram
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Vocabulary: Replace the words instagram, ronaldo, rock, followers, accounts, millions with synonyms.
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