The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide information about the percentage of
Correct article usage
the populations
populations
total Spending in a Change noun form
population's
specifics
European country Fix the agreement mistake
specific
was
spent on Sort of commodities and services in the years 1958 and 2008.
Unnecessary verb
apply
overall
, Linking Words
In
the beginning of the period, clothing was the biggest segment, Change the preposition
At
while
luxury goods made up the lowest part of the chart. In comparison, Linking Words
at the end
of the period, housing was the Linking Words
hightest
part and the smallest sector was made by travel and transport.
In 1958 , Correct your spelling
highest
housing
sector accounted for 22% and Correct article usage
the housing
increasing
by 32% in 2008. At the beginning of the period, food and luxury goods Wrong verb form
increased
compromised
8% and 79% respectively and these figures rose moderately to 17% Verb problem
comprised
and
in 2008.
In 2008, Correct word choice
apply
clothing
sector Correct article usage
the clothing
contribution
32% and , showed decreased gradually by 12% in 2008 .Replace the word
contributed
Moreover
, Entertainment and travel/transport made up 18% and 13% Sequentially and these Linking Words
figure
downward slightly to almost 16% and 6% in 2008.Correct subject-verb agreement
figures
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