You recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference. - What is the conference about? - How did you know about the conference? - Explain to him/her why it is important that you attend this conference. You should You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ......,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to request permission to
attain regarding
the Verb problem
attend
confernce
going to be held in our company which was already posted on the notice board at the entrance which will help me Correct your spelling
conference
enhancing
my skills related to my field work.
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enhance
This
conference is all about the Linking Words
buisness
strategy in Correct your spelling
business
this
upcoming era. It is Linking Words
named
as " Instrusive mindset for business". Verb problem
called
This
event is going to be held by one of the known Linking Words
director
of Change to a plural noun
directors
"
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the "Relience"
Relience
" group Correct your spelling
Reliance
who's
name is Correct your spelling
whose
Mr.
MUKESHBHAI AMBHANI . Change the punctuation
Mr
In
Change preposition
At
this
conference , the representative Linking Words
itself
is going to discuss Correct pronoun usage
himself
about
his own life hurdles during his new Remove the preposition
apply
start up
business and how he Add a hyphen
start-up
come
up with his own strategy.
I personally come up Change the verb form
comes
by knowing
Verb problem
with
this
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adverstisement
from our notice board itself Correct your spelling
advertisement
infront
of Correct your spelling
front
entrance
. I saw Add an article
the entrance
Correct article usage
a gaint
gaint
poster with Correct your spelling
giant
attractive
theme which made me inclined Add an article
an attractive
the attractive
putting
glance Change the verb form
to put
on
it . In that poster , Change preposition
at
link
was already Add an article
the link
a link
mention
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mentioned
at the end
with bold Linking Words
letter
in which Fix the agreement mistake
letters
venue
and timings were posted for the participation. Correct article usage
the venue
This
particular link made me known Linking Words
about
the detailed information regarding Change preposition
of
this
event.
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Additionally
, I want to let you know regarding Linking Words
this
event that how much it is crucial for my personal growth. It will add up knowledge and polish my Linking Words
skill
, where Fix the agreement mistake
skills
i
have been lackingChange the capitalization
I
in
. Change preposition
apply
As well
, Rephrase
Also
this
Linking Words
attendence
will improve my ideas and Correct your spelling
attendance
technics
in my current job which would be Correct your spelling
techniques
also
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Correct article usage
a postive
postive
sign for our Correct your spelling
positive
companys
Correct your spelling
company
enchancemnt
or growth . So kindly, I was asking permission to attain it .
Yours Faithfully,
Drashti chotaliya.Correct your spelling
environment
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity.
logical structure
Improve logical structure by organizing the letter into clear sections: introduction, details of the conference, reason for attendance, and conclusion.
complete response
You have addressed all the main task elements: describing the conference, how you found out about it, and why it is important.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a professional and polite tone throughout, suitable for communication with a manager.
greeting and closing
Correct greeting and closing provide a good structure to the letter.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.