The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of the children’s activities. the first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
The two charts provide a
proportion
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information
about the findings of a study conducted on youngsters. The cultural and entertaining Change preposition
of information
activities
of boys are illustrated in the first Use synonyms
chart
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those of girls are illustrated in the Linking Words
second
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chart
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Overall
, the Linking Words
proportion
of cultural and Use synonyms
leisure
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activities
is relatively variable for boys and girls. Use synonyms
In addition
, listening to music Linking Words
is
accounted for equal quantities of both boys’ and girls’ Unnecessary verb
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activities
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Turning to the first Use synonyms
chart
, we can observe that most of the boys’ cultural and Use synonyms
leisure
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activities
are computer games in about more than one third (34%), with basketball in Use synonyms
second
place with more than a quarter of the Use synonyms
proportion
(26%). Basketballs, skateboarding and soccer are very popular in boys’ cultural and Use synonyms
leisure
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activities
with more than half of the
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proportion
(54%).
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In contrast
, the situation is significantly different with girls. By taking a closer look at the Linking Words
second
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chart
, we can observe that dancing is in first place at about (27%), Use synonyms
while
reading is in Linking Words
second
place at about (21%). Netball and gymnastics are very popular in girls’ cultural and Use synonyms
leisure
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activities
with just above a quarter of the Use synonyms
proportion
(26%).Use synonyms
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