33.The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a Europena university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

33.The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a Europena university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The presented bar chart compares data about how many people from 4 various countries namely, China, Japan, America, and Russia applied to European universities from 2004 to 2008.
Overall
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, it was important that the trends of immigration for education in all countries other than China increased over the period of four years.
According to
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the diagram, China, the main country that had the highest number of students applying for university in Europe in 2004, hit nearly 27000 in the beginning;
then
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it reduced significantly to roughly 17000 in 2006 after that, its figure was constant until 2007;
finally
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, it fell slightly to 15000 in 2008. America, the second one, recorded 20000 in 2004;
then
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it declined somewhat to 15000 in 2005;
nevertheless
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, it nearly 3000 grew, but it dropped and touched the nadir at 10000 in 2008.
Although
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, it leapt enormously to the main country in 2008 at nearly 2700. The graph demonstrates that Japan reached 5000 in 2004;
thereafter
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, it rose moderately to 10000 in 2008. Russia scored just over zero at the start;
then
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it climbed considerably and peaked at almost 8000 in 2007;
however
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, it dipped sharply to approximately 3000 in 2008.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • comparison
  • applicant numbers
  • peak years
  • growth
  • decline
  • pattern
  • influence
  • factors
  • diplomatic relationships
  • economic conditions
  • demand
  • convergence
  • divergence
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