The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of most

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the

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students

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is on showing

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their fashion in

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the form

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of fancy

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rather than studies.

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multiple views among parents some think that

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as

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wrong and

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that all

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student

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students

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should wear

school

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uniform

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. I will elaborate on it

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further

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paragraphs.

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with in the past during time period of Gurukuls and Ashrams ,

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were forced to wear simple

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or

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.

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similar outfit of all

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, they treat each other equally whether they are children of any king or

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simple labour.

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morals of equality among kids

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teenagers during that time. But these rules are no More

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are allowed to wear whatever they want to.

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, these days

students

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spend hours

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deciding what will they wear in class. Their focus is always on how they are looking and

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their friends or Classmates are noticing their clothes or not.

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,

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a study conducted by

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of California,

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of

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school

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schools

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with proper dress

code

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codes

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were more sincere,

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and

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leaned toward

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gols

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goals

as compared to those schools ,where

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students

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wear clothes

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their will. In conclusion, I completely agree with the statement that student nowadays are busy

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showing their status by wearing fancy clothes rather than their academics. I personally

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that

students

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should always wear

school

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uniform

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uniforms

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during

school

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hours

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ther

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there

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time

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times

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when they can wear

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dresses

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according to

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their taste

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for

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instance , annual

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functions

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or

school

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farewell

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, but rest of the days they must

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proper

school

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dress.