4 JAN ---------- The chart diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

4 JAN ---------- The chart diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagram illustrates the
process
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of electricity production using coal as a raw material.
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, it can be seen that there are five stages before electricity is distributed, starting with the crushing of coal and ending at the
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power plant. Looking at the
process
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in detail, coal is first prepared by being crushed into fine gravel through a milling
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. The processed coal is
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transported to a gasifier, where it reacts with steam and air at high temperatures and pressures, producing hot fuel
gas
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.
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this
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,
this
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gas
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is cooled in heat exchangers, during which heat waste is released into the atmosphere through a big chimney. At the fourth step in the
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, the fuel
gas
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is cleaned before being sent to the
gas
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power plant. In that place, the fuel
gas
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is used to generate steam, which drives the turbine's blades.
Thi
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This
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converts the kinetic into electrical energy.
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, the
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electricity is distributed to consumers through a complex system of power lines and transformers.
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