4 JAN ---------- The chart diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the
process
of electricity production using coal as a raw material. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that there are five stages before electricity is distributed, starting with the crushing of coal and ending at the Linking Words
gas
power plant.
Looking at the Use synonyms
process
in detail, coal is first prepared by being crushed into fine gravel through a milling Use synonyms
process
. The processed coal is Use synonyms
then
transported to a gasifier, where it reacts with steam and air at high temperatures and pressures, producing hot fuel Linking Words
gas
. Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
gas
is cooled in heat exchangers, during which heat waste is released into the atmosphere through a big chimney.
At the fourth step in the Use synonyms
process
, the fuel Use synonyms
gas
is cleaned before being sent to the Use synonyms
gas
power plant. In that place, the fuel Use synonyms
gas
is used to generate steam, which drives the turbine's blades. Use synonyms
Thi
converts the kinetic into electrical energy. Correct your spelling
This
Finally
, the Linking Words
generate
electricity is distributed to consumers through a complex system of power lines and transformers.Change the form of the verb
generated
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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