All large companies should provide sports and community facilities to the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

These days all big private institutions have to implement different types of sports activities and public facilities for the local society. I totally agree with

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of corporations in the community and

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health care in the nation.

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with

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a major

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of

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companies

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develop city facilities like public

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. In other terms, public

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as buses, trains and metros are the way to transport around the city with

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fees and decrease air pollution that comes from cars to protect the environment which plays

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significant

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that improving society,

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, in 2020, there was a study conducted at King Abdulaziz University in Jeddah, Saudi Arabia, on the influence

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of companies by implemented public

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facility with decreasing air pollution the study showed there was a declined by 54%. The second crucial

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of companies was to establish a huge population programme that enhances doing healthy lifestyle.

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, private organizations should launch a publicity campaign in the media, colleges and schools to aware people

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the importance of sports and healthy food to reduce various diseases.

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, a survey published in Makkah newspaper on the effect of campaigns to enhance lifestyle modification and identify the risk of many disorders in society the results had shown there is 30% increase in people's health awareness and

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the dangers of many illnesses. In conclusion

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private companies play a vital

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in the community by implementing different approaches

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as public

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methods and health programs to reach the development goals of the nation. In my opinion, I strongly favour

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approaches

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