The bar chart provides information about how much earnings from export activity of a country while the table illustrates the proportion of change in values from 2015 to 2016.

The bar chart provides information about how much earnings from export activity of a country while the table illustrates the proportion of change in values from 2015 to 2016.
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The bar chart and table provide key information about how much earnings from the export activity of a country
whereas
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the table illustrates the proportion of change in values from 2015 to 2016. The units are measured in percentages and billions.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that textiles were a significant factor in changing the values.
In addition
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, we see that engineered goods had a higher variation in their value,
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gems and jewellery were declining.
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what is shown in the bar chart, in 2016, petroleum products had been a substantial contributor at 63%
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in 2015, they exported a lot of petroleum products at 60%.
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, the gems and jewellery were exporting a moderate amount of value. In terms of agricultural products and textiles, in 2015, they were importing an equivalent amount between these years. We noticed in 2015, all sectors were exporting a higher percentage compared to 2015, they had exported slightly lower than past year.
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