The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart below illustrates the average household expenditures in a city in 1950 and 2010.

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it is clear that

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there are six items in

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statistic.

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, the highest part in the first year was Housing, at the same time, food scored peak value in 2010. with no significant changes in education.

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with, Housing started by 72.1% in the first period. After that. It

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dramatically decreased in 2010 by 22%.

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, food recorded 11.2 per cent in 1950.

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, it became three times higher in the second year.

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, the health care part was only 2.4% in 1950. with a slight jump to 4.5% after 60 years.

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, the Education section was 6.6%. The doubled number of transportation.

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, it dropped by 0.3%.

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, the transportation and Other parts had a similar change in their figures. They increased around three times higher in their values in 2010

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