jan,,,The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts how many people by their
age
in 2011 and 2012 in New Zealand. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that the population increased Linking Words
although
there was a decline in the Linking Words
age
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group
of under 15 and aged 15 to 39 but an increase in the other two groups.
Looking in more detail, the population of New Zealand stood at 4.381.269 in 2011, which increased by 0.6% to 4.410.284 in 2012. Use synonyms
However
, the communities in the category of under 15 and 15-19 declined at the same rate of 0.2%, from 898.160 and 1.577.256 to 896.364 and 1.574.102, respectively.
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On the other hand
, the remaining two categories rose during the same period. Linking Words
Although
the total number of the 65+ Linking Words
age
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group
was the smallest figure in both years, Use synonyms
this
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group
recorded an increase of 4% from 573.946 to 596.903, becoming the highest increase among all Use synonyms
age
categories. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
group
of 40-64 ages noted 1.331.907 in 2011 and 1.339.898 in 2012, showing the same percentage of change as Use synonyms
at
the total population, at 0.6%.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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