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The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
"The pie chart displays five types of
energy
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production
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 in 1995 and projects them for 2005. "
Overall
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, coal and gas
production
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 increased in both years,
while
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 the least increase was observed in other and nuclear
energy
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. "In 1995, coal accounted for nearly 29.8% of
energy
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production
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, and
this
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 is set to increase to approximately 30.93% by 2005. The next biggest
production
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 was gas, contributing nearly 29.63% in 1995, and it is predicted to remain the second largest source with only around a 1% increase." "In 1995, nuclear
energy
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 had the least
production
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 at 6.40%, and it increased to 10.10% by 2005. Other
energy
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production
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 increased by five percentage points over the two years.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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