Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loos of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of bio diversity? What solution can you suggest?
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on its living beings. It has led to the alterations of the ecosystem which in turn, has reduced its biodiversity. There are several causes of it, Linking Words
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taking proper measures on time.
There are several factors responsible for Correct article usage
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environmental changes. Correct determiner usage
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, the mass urbanization and industrialisation have caused significant deforestation, which has destructive effects on the ecosystem.it is directly responsible for Linking Words
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climate change. Correct article usage
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, deforestation of Amazon's rainforest is a major cause of global warming and ecosystem change. It Linking Words
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of chemical fertilizers, and industrial waste spillage into the water has destroyed the water life. Aquatic life is getting destroyed because of these toxins. Use synonyms
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, the cultivation of the same crops repeatedly and the Linking Words
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the biodiversity.
There are many ways to cope with these above-mentioned issues. Correct subject-verb agreement
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establishing and effectively managing national parks like Lake District in England.It helps to preserve the natural environment which is a key to keeping endangered species safe. Linking Words
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, reforestation should be promoted. Linking Words
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can be done by creating awareness about the dangers of the exploitation of the natural habitat of animals and other creatures in schools and other educational institutions. Linking Words
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, there should be a ban on the Linking Words
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plants .
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trees to create more land for industries and domestic Correct article usage
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other problems. These problematic impacts can be lessened by more plantations of trees, preservation of the national parks and decreased Linking Words
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of harmful materials on crops .Use synonyms
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Consider developing your ideas further to fully explore the complexity of the topic. This might include discussing additional causes or providing more detailed solutions.
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