WThe line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line graph illustrates the number of coffee exports in three different countries from 2002 to 2012.

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, it is clearly seen that Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica

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an upward trend. In detail, the number of coffee exports in Brazil started at 13kg

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and increased

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to 15kg over the next 4 years.The proportion rose rapidly to 20kg in 2008

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and decreased merely to 18kg until 2010.

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, the figure jumped dramatically to 25kg in the final year. In the case of Costa Rica started at 15kg, and dropped significantly to 7kg between 2002 and 2006. After that, the proportion surged gradually to 20kg in the period. Turning to the figure for Colombia started at 5kg, and escalated steadily to 12kg in 2006.Afterwards, the proportion

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sharply to 2kg in 2008, and climbed steeply to 15kg from 2008 to 2012.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

142 words

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WThe line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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