The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar chart illustrates the difference in the percentage of city residents who bought and drank
coffee
Use synonyms
and tea in the
last
Linking Words
4 weeks in five Australian
cities
Use synonyms
. In
Brisbane
Use synonyms
and
Adelaide
Use synonyms
, there were many similarities. The percentage of residents buying fresh
coffee
Use synonyms
was similar, just below 35%, both of which were lower than buying
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
and going to a
cafe
Use synonyms
for
coffee
Use synonyms
or tea. The gap between buying
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
and going to a
cafe
Use synonyms
was small in both
cities
Use synonyms
, less than 5%, but the proportion in
Brisbane
Use synonyms
outnumbered
Adelaide
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
, the situation in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart was different to
Brisbane
Use synonyms
and
Adelaide
Use synonyms
. It was obvious that the gap between buying
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
and going to a
cafe
Use synonyms
was over 7% in the three
cities
Use synonyms
, where the proportion of citizens going to a
cafe
Use synonyms
was the largest, more than 60%. Similar to
Brisbane
Use synonyms
and
Adelaide
Use synonyms
, the percentage of buying fresh
coffee
Use synonyms
was
also
Linking Words
the lowest in the 3
cities
Use synonyms
, but all over 35%, higher than
Brisbane
Use synonyms
and
Adelaide
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
,
it is clear that
Linking Words
in the five
cities
Use synonyms
, more dwellers chose to go to a
cafe
Use synonyms
than buy
instant
Use synonyms
and fresh
coffee
Use synonyms
, except for
Adelaide
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by 1378468145 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, brisbane, adelaide, instant, cafe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: