The diagram below shows the process of making cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Công Thành.

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The diagram illustrates the process of

produce

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chese

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cheese

these

from

milk

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Overall

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the

produce

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product

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includes

elevent

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eleven

relevant

eleventh

steps .

Firstly

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is pasteurization and

finally

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is ripening.Making

chese

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cheese

these

and is the line process by

man made

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man-made

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First

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step , raw

milk

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was pasteurized.The

milk

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is put into a machine which

the

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apply

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pasteurized the raw

milk

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and standardization and filtration .

Then

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the

milk

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is poured into a basin . They will pour some liquid into it , which

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is name

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name

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Renet( enzyme)

has

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and has

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fermenting microorganisms . After 30 minutes to 2 hours,

milk

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will curdle . Continue , they will cut the curd into small

piece

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pieces

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like corn and

stirring

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stir

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and

cooking

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cook

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it .

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The next

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step

they

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apply

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will dehydrate

those

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cheese likely draining . After

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milk

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the milk

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become

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becomes

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smooth in the machine

milk

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mix

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is mixed

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with salty

made up

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made-up

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fresh cheese. But no end . They

pooring

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pouring

into

box

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the box

a box

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Finally

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put the boxes on the shelf

wait

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and wait

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for

cheese

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the cheese

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to ripen and finish.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

156 words

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The diagram below shows the process of making cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Công Thành.

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right.

There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your own opinion and solutions.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. Do advantage of this development outweigh this disadvantages.