The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009

The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009
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The pie charts give information about the changes in the percentage of various forms of transport namely; foot ,bus, train, car and others which the citizens of Europe used for travelling to their offices ,in 1959 and 2009 .
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,we observe that ,in 2009 ,not only average distance but
additionally
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duration grew drastically , in comparison to 1959 .
By contrast
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it is clear that
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more than half of the employees walked to and from work in 1959
whereas
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car users increased in 2009. In 1959 ,most of the workers (55%) walked to their workplaces and
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came back on foot .
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,it is noticeable that
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the average distance was 3,5 km and the average duration was 17 minutes. It was followed by bus and train which had the same ratio of 15%.
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,the proportion of car users was 10%.A minority of workers used other types of vehicles (5%). By 2009 , the indicators of auto users had climbed dramatically and reached 35% .The figures for individuals who had preferred train remained steady at 15 %
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others had rose to 12%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modes of transport
  • private transport
  • public transport
  • car ownership
  • cycling
  • pedestrian
  • commuter trends
  • urban infrastructure
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental sustainability
  • public policy
  • evolution
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • decade
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • reliability
  • urban planning
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