The line graph shows the proportion of total exports of clothing in 4 countries in 2000 and 2014.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of total Use synonyms
exports
of clothing in 4 countries in 2000 and 2014.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the quantity of Linking Words
exports
in Asia, the USA, European Union went down, Use synonyms
whereas
China’s Linking Words
exports
increased.
As the graph shows, the Use synonyms
number
of China selling overseas in 2000 was 14 Use synonyms
million
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exports
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however
, the figure went up sharply without dropping until it reached approximately 37 Linking Words
million
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exports
in 2014. The European Union sold around 30 and 35 Use synonyms
million
clothing abroad in 2000, Use synonyms
while
the index decreased slowly and in 2002 Linking Words
exports
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number
was 32 Use synonyms
million
. The figure continued dropping until it reached 23 Use synonyms
million
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exports
in 2010. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the index fell slightly and in 2014 the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
exports
in the European Union was 21 Use synonyms
million
.
Asia’s Use synonyms
exports
in 2000 were 30 Use synonyms
million
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however
, it dropped sharply to 18 Linking Words
million
in 2002 and from 2002 to 2004 the index did not change, Use synonyms
moreover
, the Linking Words
number
rose slowly to 20 Use synonyms
million
until 2014. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
last
country is the USA. Starting from 2000 USA exported 11 Linking Words
million
of clothing and in 2002 the Use synonyms
number
did not change, but it dropped slowly until it reached 8 Use synonyms
million
in 2008. The figure went up for a bit to 9 Use synonyms
million
in 2010 but from 2010 to 2014 export numbers went down to 6 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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