The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares the consumption of three types of spreads ( Margarine, Butter, Low fat & reduced spreads) between 1981 and 2007. As reflected by the Yaxis, the units were measured in
grams
.
At first glance, it can be seen that butter was the most consumed Use synonyms
spread
in 1981, followed by Margarine. Having said that, these two spreads were least consumed in the end. Use synonyms
Although
Low fat & reduced spreads saw a sharp rise in 2001, Linking Words
at the end
of the period, it became the maximum eaten Linking Words
spread
.
On the one hand, butter was highly consumed among all three spreads in the first year, with just over 140 Use synonyms
grams
it grew modestly and hit a peak at nearly 160 Use synonyms
grams
in 1996. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, it experienced a downward trend and reached 50 Linking Words
grams
in 2007, being the second most used Use synonyms
spread
. MargarineUse synonyms
,
followed a similar pattern but with slight fluctuations, it started at 90 Remove the comma
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grams
in the first year and dropped by 10 points in 1986. Use synonyms
Additionally
, before undergoing the fall, it levelled off at 100 Linking Words
grams
from 1991 to 1996, becoming the lowest consumed Use synonyms
spread
. Use synonyms
Finally
, low fat and reduced spreads were not introduced until 1996, it enjoyed a sharp rise and hit a high at nearly 90 Linking Words
grams
in 2001, before dropping to 70 Use synonyms
grams
in the Use synonyms
last
year,Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, spread with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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