The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities over three time periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph provides information about the numbers of the population in the 5 top largest crowded cities including Tokyo, New York, Shanghai, Bombay, and Jakarta over three different time periods.

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, each city experienced significant growth in the next period,

however

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, Tokyo had the largest community

at the end

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of the period compared to other cities. Looking closely, it was clear that from the beginning, Tokyo has been initiated as the most crowded city, reaching above 15 and

then

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sharply increasing until hit a peak of over 25 in 2010. New York was the second top public density in 1970,

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slowly made up about 17 in 2010. Shanghai was the city which had

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substantial

denizens

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number of denizens

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then

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it was made up slowly by around 2,

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however

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however,

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it rose dramatically to above 20 in 2010. Bombay and Jakarta were the 2 least significant parts

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to the population about 5 and 2 respectively but it dramatically increased to above 25 and under 20.