The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts how to
shape
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the
glass
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containers.
Overall
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, the process consists of nine stages, it commences with the heating of the
glass
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and ends with the packaging of the glasses.
Firstly
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, the ground
glass
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is put into a furnace to heat at 105 C.
Then
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hot
glass
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is poured into the first mould to give it a certain
shape
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. Once it is poured into the first mould, the particular machine is used to press and
shape
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the
glass
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.
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the
glass
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inside the container, which has a thick wall, is put into the second mould that gives the
glass
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the normal
glass
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shape
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. In
this
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stage, air, which includes inside the
glass
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and pressure it. After that
glass
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is put into kin and heated at 482 degrees. It helps the
glass
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to keep its
shape
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.
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, at 25 degrees, it is left to cool for about 60 minutes. In the next stage, the final product is checked by the workers to separate glasses which have defects on
it
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and recycle them again. The glasses which pass the test are put into boxes.
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