The table below shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. (Hoàng Trung)

The table below shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. (Hoàng Trung)
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The given table illustrates the statistics regarding the female workforce rate in five different nations in two categories: labor and management. From an
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perspective, the percentage of women participating in the
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force is higher than female managers and Japan possesses the largest number. A closer look at the table clearly shows that the rate of female wage earners and managers in Australia is nearly identical, at 42% and 43% respectively. As for Egypt, one-fifth of the total female population works in blue-collar jobs,
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only 12% work in the administrative sector. The difference is seen as the largest in Sri Lanka since the data shows that 42% of women join the
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only 9% are in the executive field. Both Japan and the United States have higher blue-collar female worker rates in comparison with the other countries, at 48% and 46% respectively. The figure for managing females of the former is 17% and 43% of the latter.
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